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Title: La Douce Deni part 2
Author: [livejournal.com profile] trinkdufreak
Pairing: OnHo (Onew and Minho)
Summary: Minho is a college freshman and has a crush on a junior named Onew. What happens when the usually popular jock asks the people-phobic nerd Onew out on date?
A/N: part 2 of the birthday fic for [livejournal.com profile] leejaehwa7!!! hopefully I still don't fail. do the arguments make sense to you guys? hope you enjoy ^^


After his brutal shut down by the inconsiderate loner boy, Minho had deliberately stormed out of the library and in to his room. He'd gone straight to his secret box that he had stored in the back of his closet that held all of his alcohol and weekend snacks.

He hated tequila. He hated the burn, he hated the after tasted, he hated the stench from it.

But he headed straight for his closet and reached behind his shoe rack where the brown box sat patiently for his arrival.

But he flipped that top off and pulled out that tall golden bottle.

But he chugged down a few mouth fulls worth with out complaint.

He took on the stinging burn down his throat and he sighed as the warm feeling glazed over his chest.

Minho was annoyed, he knew that. But it was more than that. His ego was taking a huge hit. That loner boy had turned him down, said no to him, called him a disgusting play boy!

He had called Minho, handsome and gentlemanly with a thirst for physical love, a disgusting play boy. It wasn't like he went looking for people to sleep with, for parties to go to. People had always thrown themselves at his feet with their beer pong parties and their late night arousing in others houses. And who was Minho to deny him? So yeah. Maybe he was a play boy. He could give loner boy that.

But disgusting?

Minho was not disgusting.

He felt the warm tingle escape from his chest and rise to his head. That felt better. He smiled a little as the tingle washed over his thoughts and fears, as it ran its course down his limbs and in to his knees. Like they were solid jelly. Like he was swaying in to waves that almost knocked him over. But just a little. He wasn't fully submerged in to the waves yet.

Disgusting. Who was he calling disgusting? Wasn't like anyone else was asking loner boy out! He was luck to even have such a guy as Minho stalk him for the last couple of months.

“Stupid loner boy.” he muttered and capped the tequila to set it back in to the box behind his shoe rack. He needed to be out and about. Suddenly his room was feeling a little too small.

His head rolled over his shoulders to look at who had pounced in to his room.

His roommate, Kyuhyun came waltzing in with a sly smile on his face.

“Minho! Let's go out!” he announced to his already buzzed roommate.

“Mmm?” Minho asked.

“Couple of girls down the hall invited me to their 'Pink Party'. Its the uniting of the three top girl sororities on campus. They said to bring as many friend as I want! Dude let's go!” Kyuhyun looked to eager to be in a house full of girls wearing pink.

“M'kay.” Minho smiled and quickly checked his pockets. Phone, wallet, keys.

“Let's go.” Minho followed his roomate out of his room and out of their complex.

“Do you wanna invite that Jonghyun kid? We can stop by his place right quick to grab him.” the older boy asked as the headed out to Kyuhyun's parked car.

Inviting Jonghyun meant probably seeing Onew at their room. The devious side of Minho said it would mean to show loner boy how good a time he was going to have. That just because he had been denied didn't mean loner boy was the only person on the planet. There were plenty of hot guys and girls who would want to lay Minho tonight. He could throw in loner boy's face how much fun he could have right after being shut down.

He was going to show loner boy how he should regret ever turning down Choi Minho.

“Yeah yeah let's go get him.” Minho hummed as he sank in to the front seat and let his head roll back when the car zoomed forward.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Minho hammered at the small red door. After a moment of audible rustling, he heard a click, and then the door pulled open.

And there stood the loner boy. Right in front of him. Minho wanted to hate him. He wanted to spit in his face and push him out of his fucking way. Show the little fuck who was better.

But god help him all he really wanted to do was drop to his knees and beg for a hope of some sort that he even had a chance with this magnificent being with a heartwarming smile. Just a small hope for a small chance...

His ego denied him that want.

“You're not welcome here.” Onew glared up at the younger boy. His ego boosted just a bit to realize that he was in fact taller than the older boy.

“I'm not here for you.” Minho growled and took part in his former urge to push past the loner and get to his goal. He ignored the protests from Onew, who pushed back and tried to close the door, and pushed right back and gripped the thick red door with his left hand and regretfully shoved Onew's face with his right. Causing the older boy to stumble back, giving Minho the opportunity to saunter in to the all too familiar dorm room.

He knew he'd find Jonghyun in his room, the door was ajar to right of the entrance, on his small bed with his guitar in hand. He found the older boy exactly where he thought he would, but he was already in the middle of a song and his mouth was wide open as a sweet melody came out of his mouth.

“Hey!” Minho called out over the powerful voice. Jonghyun abruptly stopped and his eyes widened in surprise to see the freshmen in his room.

“Hey man! What's up?” Jonghyun's crooked smile appeared at the younger fumbled with one of Jonghyun's many notebooks.

“What's up? What's up is, I am taking you with me to go to a parteee!” Minho slurred and made odd gestures of pointing up, then himself, then to Jonghyun, then to himself again. He laughed freely as Jonghyun chuckled at Minho's obvious alcohol influence.

“Uh, I can't man. I have some work to do and—“

“Nope! You with me. Now.” Minho didn't like the feeling of being denied twice in one day. There was no way in hell. Jonghyun laughed some more as the younger boy snatched his beloved guitar away and set it in to its designated case and happily pulled his Hyung off of his bed and out of his room. He sighed in relief at hearing his Hyung agree to going if the younger one insisted.

“Jonghyun? Where are you going?” Onew was oh so conveniently standing in the main room of their dorm.

“Uh..a party, right Minho?” Jonghyun looked to the freshmen for an answer. Minho nodded, avoiding contact with the junior who was throwing accusing glares his way. Stupid magnificent loner boy.

“Lemme just grab a jacket and my keys and stuff. Kay Minho?” the shortest of the trio went back in to his room for his necessary items, leaving the two to face off.

Minho still avoided Onew's gaze...or glare.

“Jonghyun should be studying. Not partying.” Onew spat in Minho's direction. The younger scoffed and immaturely crossed his arms over his chest. Still avoiding the loner boy's gaze.

“What are you,” Minho finally rolled his eyes to meet the angry one's of the older boy, “his mother?” so he didn't have a better comeback. So what?

It was Onew's turn to scoff and roll his eyes. He was just as immature and stupid as he thought.

“You're so stupid. He could be studying and doing better things than going out with morons like you.” Onew said. He had to hold on to his composure. He had to hold on to his composure. He had to—

“God what did I ever think, what the hell went through my head?!” Minho's little ability to keep his composure was falling away.

“What? What the hell are you talking about you idiot?” Onew copied the freshman and crossed his arms. Idiot? Composure gone.

“Idiot? Do you ever think before you just insult people with your fucked up words? Idiot, yes Onew you are so correct. What an idiot I am.” he advanced on the older boy. To his delight he watched the loner boy flinch when Minho raised his hand to harshly poke the older's shoulder.

“What a complete moronic idiot I am to ask out some heartless asshole like you. God what the fuck was I thinking?!” he actually shoved the older boy in to the nearest wall. He hated how Onew looked shocked, looked angered. He could feel Onew's hatred for him just rolling off in huge waves. The same waves Minho had previously been trying to not drown in. he could feel them, rolling and pushing him under. He fought back, pushing back, pushing Onew in to wall and hoping to get that stupid magnificent beautiful face out of his mind.

“You are a complete asshole. You have no clue who I am, what I feel, what I want. And yet you call me disgusting and say that I am not worthy to be a life long partner. Me disgusting? You are the disgusting one.” Minho found his hands balled in Onew's shirt, his fingers ached as they tightened around the fabric with fury, his muscles jerk and he shook his crush. The waves were still rolling off, suffocating him.”

“You disgust me. With the way you are so smart and brilliant. With the way you keep to yourself so I am stuck panting and wanting like a thirsty dog. Wanting to know so much more about you. Dreaming about you and fawning over you like a fucking school girl. You are disgusting!” Minho could feel his rage reaching its peak. He couldn't stop himself. He knew he would regret everything he was saying. But he needed to fight those waves. They kept crashing down on him.

“That's not my fault!” Onew yelled in to Minho's face. Another wave of hate crushing his body. But he couldn't tell, was it Onew's hate shoving him down? Or was it his own self hatred trying to choke him?

Oh he was having none of that.

“YOU FUCKING DISGUST ME! WITH YOUR PERFECT SMILE THAT MAKES ME FALL IN LOVE WITH YOU!” Minho's throat was soar, his mouth right on Onew's forehead, his fists pulling the older boy up to him. He was fighting these waves. He had to fight.

“Minho? What the fuck?!” he felt firm hands pull him off of the older boy he had pinned to a wall. He ignored the force that was pulling him away.

“You make me disgusted with my fucking self. I think about you all day long, I fantasize just about talking to you, just seeing you smile at me. I disgust my fucking self. Because I can't help but like you and love you and want you. I show my affection. I confess to you and you call me disgusting? Fuck you.” Minho was seething. He was hating every word that escaped his mouth and yet he could not stop his words. Not for a second. Onew just laughed. He didn't cry or scream at Minho. No he stayed calm, and spoke more venomous words. Words that were greater waves of hate, drowning him in his own self hate.

“Well you're just proving my point. You come around my dorm, reeking of alcohol and you're going out to drink more, to sleep around more. You storm in to my dorm to take my roommate out to another one of your stupid parties to get stupid drunk and sleep with random strangers. You are disgusting, you are an idiot, and you are not worthy of a long life relationship. Especially with me. I'm worth much more than you think Minho. The older boy turned his gaze away from him. The same thing he'd done to him in the library. Like he didn't care enough to look at Minho when he insulted him.

“I'm worthy of a guy who doesn't go out and drink whenever he wants to forget that his cocky self got rejected. Sorry I want a guy with an IQ above 2.playboy. I'm worthy of that. If you are disgusted with yourself, that’s not my problem, its yours. Its your problem that you like me, its your problem that you disgust your own self, its your problem to deal with your own stupid ego that took a hit just because I rejected you.” Onew huffed out hot air and mocked him. He fucking mocked him, with his fucking smile. That brilliant smile that warmed his heart and broke it all at once. He was fucking smiling at him, while throwing those hateful words in his face. He was tearing him apart, with that fucking smile.

“I rejected you, I don't like you, I never will, I hate you.” Onew whispered lowly and cruelly.

“So deal with it.” he hissed at Minho's stone face. And with that, he shoved past Minho and in to his room.

The waves were covering him, he was pulled under. He couldn't breath. He couldn't move. He was done. He was gone.

“Hey man, “ he heard a soft voice at his ear. He pulled his eyes up from the floor, and up to see a concerned Jonghyun. The older boy gently patted the freshman's face with affection.

“Who cares what Onew thinks hm? I think a drink would do you good.” Jonghyun laughed and tugged at the younger to start walking out of his dorm.

He took a breath as they finally exited the room, he could feel himself slowly floating to the surface now, swimming up and out of that wave of hate.

“If I had known you had such a big crush on Onew hyung,” Jonghyun joked as the two headed out of the dorm building and out to Kyuhyun's awaiting car, “I would of told you not to bother.” Jonghyun quickly greeted the excited driver and climbed in to the back seat.

“Why's that?” Minho calmly asked. He was floating above the hate now, just floating there. He knew what was beneath him, but he was trying not to go back down.

“Onew's too scared of people. I told you that before. He's a people phoebe. He can't handle a new person, he can't handle anybody. And he is a bit of an unsocial person as well. He's just scared is all.”Jonghyun said from the back seat.

And just like that, Minho saw the light at the end of the tunnel.

“What would I have to do? To make him not afraid of me?” Minho asked, his mood perching up in a split second. His mood plummeted back down as the older boy shook his head and told Minho to not bother.

They arrived at the party. And it was just as Kyuhyun had said. Three sororities, all in pink. Minho remembered arriving with his two wing men. He remembered meeting two cute brunettes that led him to the make shift bar. He remembered the first three shots of alcohol, though no one told him what he was drinking. It didn't matter. New waves were forming to wash over him. They were so different though. They were wide and swift, and they were powerful and thrilling. Nothing like the waves Onew had thrown at him. He welcomed these waves. He dived right in. and he felt his grip on reality tug loose as he took down another glass of something that was a little sweet and really strong. He let himself be pulled under.

Someone had their hands under his shirt, someone was kissing him, someone was licking his neck.

He had his hands on someone's hips, he had his lips on someone's collarbone, he was tugging off someone’s shirt.

He was falling on to a bed. And his head pounded when it hit a soft mattress beneath it, his eyes rolled and his mind waved. He couldn't remember how he'd gotten here. This room, this girl, this bed.

But he didn't care. It felt good, so it had to be good right?

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

His mind went black, and he sunk down back to the bottom of his waves of pleasure.

When he came to, he was in the back of Kyuhyun's car. He knew that, because of that stupid Hawaiian bobble head girl on Kyuhyun's dashboard. His head was still swimming, he limbs felt like heavy anchors dragging him down.

His head rolled up as both Kyuhyun and Jonghyun got in to the car together.

“Oh look he's alive!” Jonghyun giggled, his eyes landing on the drunk freshman in the back seat.

“Course he is! I found him in a bed on the second story.” Kyuhyun laughed along.

“What? Why was he in there?” Jonghyun giggled, Minho felt the car engine rev to life.

“Probably getting some like he does at every party we go to. That cute little man whore.” Kyuhyun snickered and Minho heard the two joke more about how Minho gets more action than the two of the older boys combined. He heard them joke and kid and he let his eyes fall closed. And he fell back to the bottom of his waves.

He felt himself being carried, and someone dumped him on to his bed. He opened his eyes to find Jonghyun gently throwing a blanket over his body.

“What can I do?” Minho asked. Jonghyun looked down at him with a questioning gaze.

“What can I do to make Onew not hate me?” he asked quietly, his head was still pounding. His body was weighing him down, he felt sick and not all there.

“Are you still on that kid?” Jonghyun laughed. Minho pouted up at his friend who chuckled and sighed. Knowing that Minho was not going to let this go. Whether drunk or sober, he was going to want an answer.

“I don't know Minho. It took me almost two years to get close to him. You have to constantly be around him.” Jonghyun pushed a pillow under Minho's chin. The older boy had worked particularly hard to turn the younger one on to his stomach and pushed his pillows under his body so that the younger one didn't have a chance of chocking if he threw up.

“You need to be around him, be kind to him. Show him that you're a good person you know? That you're not there to hurt him.” Jonghyun placed Minho's trashcan next to his bed.

“And maybe you should lay off the drinking and uh...getting laid a lot huh?” the older boy mused. Minho smiled lazily and happily hugged the pillow that was under his head.

“You really like him don't you?” Jonghyun asked Minho. The freshman nodded frantically and almost cutely with a big goofy grin on his face.

“Well then, as Onew's friend I should say leave him alone.” the older boy headed toward Minho's door.

“But as you're friend Minho, I say keep it up. Just better yourself a bit. And keep it up. You'll rub off on him eventually.” the older laughed and shut the door, leaving Minho alone with his waves and thoughts.

He could defenitly see the light at the end of the tunnel now. Even in his still drunk state, he could see it. He wasn't going to give up. He couldn't. Not on that loner boy, not on that smile.

He wanted that smile.

He wanted Onew.

He decided that he was going to continue to be disgusted with himself, to deal with himself.

Because he planned to ask Onew out all over again. And to keep asking him out until Onew said yes.


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A/N: soooo Jae I hoped you liked it....er like it still~ *hides* aaah I know about the My Competition!!! I'm working on it. Please don't hate me. I just need to get it beta-ed and the final touched before I release it okay? okay.

SPOT

Date: 2012-02-26 09:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] trinkdufreak.livejournal.com
Spot for Jae <333
Edited Date: 2012-02-26 09:11 am (UTC)

Re: SPOT

Date: 2012-04-03 04:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] leejaehwa7.livejournal.com
OMG…I’m such a terrible commenter! I didn’t mean for it to seem like I was ignoring you but I have read the fic updates and I got your messages but I just got so distracted with school that I haven’t had time or energy to do much on LJ.

But I’m here NOW! *runs around in circles like a crazy person* I fail at grand entrances O_O

Anyways…so…yeah…Minho is an idiot! But he has a good reason to be…he’s infatuated. But seriously, Minho did you really have to drown your sorrows in booze? Ugh…silly boy! Just because your new crush doesn’t like you back…I think it’s good for him though…knocks him down a few notches from being Mr. I’m-So-Perfect-Everyone-Loves-Me…

I think Onew is being a bit harsh, but you can’t blame him for having high standards for people he dates. Hell…I have high standards. I don’t want someone who is cocky. That is not cute. *<-said with attitude*

Have I ever mentioned that Kyuhyun was like my first ever ultimate bias…that is until Yoseobie came and smacked him down a few notches <.< But I still love me some evil-maknae-Kyu!

Minho! That is no way to treat the person you like! It’s like elementary school crushes when you pick on the person you like because you are embarrassed about liking them. Minho…GROW UP! Be the adult that Onew wants! Ugh…boys are SO DUMB sometimes!

“What are you his mother?” <- great comeback Minho! You are so mature…LOL

In Minho’s drunken rage…he also makes one hell of a confession! Onew has him so lovestruck he doesn’t know what to do with himself. I can understand his frustration though. But Onew doesn’t make things any better…it’s like he’s egging Minho on. But at the same time…he tells Minho what he wants in a guy. If only Minho would think about it…he could easily win Onew over by changing. I mean…he doesn’t have to change completely, just stop being so boy-dumb all the time.

Now Minho goes off and does more stupid things at the party…why couldn’t he decide to go home and mope after that fight with Onew? Why couldn’t he be a good little boy!?! I know why…because that would be boring…and Minho is not boring! But WHY is he so DUMB!?! WHY DID HE SLEEP WITH SOME RANDOM PERSON!?! UGH…he is such a whore!

And Jong and Kyu are just so bad assisting him in his idiocy! But it is kind of sad how at the end he was all whining about wanting Onew. Honey, start making some better decisions and you might win Onew over…it’s not that complicated…I guess it is for some people

Minho’s Idiot qualities get me so worked up…GREAT JOB on this. I would probably be very much like Onew in this. I hate when guys drink and party too much and think they are so amazing and that I should like them. Excuse me for wanting someone who is whoring around with everyone…Now, I’m off to comment on the second part after being such a turtle about it… *plays some random tune as I skip away* lalalala~

Re: SPOT

Date: 2012-04-03 05:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] trinkdufreak.livejournal.com
aaah its totally okay i understand being busy with school (it seems alot of ppl on LJ are becoming super busy with school these last few month so its no big deal) i feel like im the only one not getting busy and then i feel lazy like oh dear...mebe i am not working hard enough? how am i even finding time to write? lol.
yeaaaah my actual goal was to make ppl hate minho. just a litte big in this chapter, but then again i kind of wanted ppl to understand where both ppl are coming from. oooh you like Kyu baby??? aaah he is cutie. i seriously just put him there cuz i figured: a)minho is a hyung whore b)its known that kyu likes to drink c)he's blunt about things so he will work well in future chapters...
T^T im glad you like it and can dissect this in every way possible. seriously happy that you are reading this. i hope i can meet your standard when i get to the ending(which is far off at this point i might at well call it a chaptered fic even though it started out as a oneshot it is beyond that so idk if that makes you happy but yeah)
anywho, working on the fifthe part at the moment...the moment where Onew shows signs of getting used to minho's presence DUN DUN DUNNNNN *throws confetti*
anywho, hope you continue to read and enjoy~ now im off to reply to your reply in PCU :D *ninja jumps out of random window*

Date: 2012-02-26 02:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] oconje.livejournal.com
Yeah, Minho, don't give up on Onew, no matter how unavailable he seems...don't be like Onewstyle noona! So looking forward to next chapter!

Date: 2012-02-26 08:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] trinkdufreak.livejournal.com
never give up on Onew!! <333
Thank you for reading and commenting!! ^^
wait...what you mean by Onewstyle noona? O.O

Date: 2012-03-05 12:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] oconje.livejournal.com
Sad but tragically true, Onewstyle is shut down. She has gone on to a different fandom. Shame as she took awesome fancams and photos! Poor Onew.

Date: 2012-03-05 03:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] trinkdufreak.livejournal.com
T^T whyyyyy??
aish. this is upsetting...whatever. well now that i know this (you'd think I'd know this with Jinki being my bias *facepalm*) i shall never give up on Onew!! he is my SHINee hubby!! <33
thats too bad to hear :[

Date: 2012-02-27 12:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lethallycute.livejournal.com
HAHAHAHA! I love you for this. I found it freaking adorable. A drunk Minho and a people phobe Onew. Yerp you just made my life :)

Date: 2012-02-27 05:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] trinkdufreak.livejournal.com
eeeeeeee yay!! aah I find phoeb Onew very cute too~
ahahaha happy to make your life! lol
thank you for reading and commenting!!

Date: 2012-02-27 06:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] playingods.livejournal.com
askjdlskdjasd my god minho DON'T GIVE UP! i'm sure you can make onew fall for you, sooner or later (which i believe its later bcs damn onew seems to hate minho so much XD)

Date: 2012-02-28 08:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] trinkdufreak.livejournal.com
aaah he kind of does hate him alot huh? oh well, tough love bebe!
Thank you for reading and commenting~ <333

Date: 2012-02-28 05:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sweatnitemare.livejournal.com
How come I didn't know about this fic? It wasn't on my friends page or did I missed it?

Thank God I was suddenly craving to read My Competition again from the 1st chapter and I found this fic.

This is so good. I like their arguments. Minho, you gotta impress the man bruh. Don't give up. Like jong said, you'll rub off on him eventually.

He has no trust in people and umm~ you mister popular is such a bad boy. I know! Sing him Bigbang's Bad Boy maybe jinki will let you in a little.

This is good. As always from you.

Date: 2012-02-28 08:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] trinkdufreak.livejournal.com
aaaaah you are so nice!! o///o you make me blush lol.
EH? you read my competition again?? from the first...OH MA GAWD!! I LOVE YOU!! *squishes you with love* T-T you totally made my day! I'm trying not to disturb the other people in the library with my happy dance!

bahahahaha! bigbang's bad boy! (i really like the mv, all the tattoos and bad boy looks on gd and taeyang look hot!)

Thank you for (finding this) reading and commenting! gah...so happy right now!

GAAAH! (your last two sentences) STOP IT! you are too nice!
thank you <333

Date: 2012-02-29 05:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reinyuu.livejournal.com
wooow... i love this..
onew is sooo different..
he's scared of people but he can throw that sharp wotd to minho..
onew yah dont be too hard to minho..karma is exist you know..lol

and yeah... keep fighting minho goon..
dont let onew take you down..make him fall for you...

hahahaa i cant resist to comment in here while i skip comment to competition :p will cmment it later.. and please updte it asap xD

Date: 2012-02-29 06:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] trinkdufreak.livejournal.com
AH HA! you noticed that huh? ironic right? how he has the poeple pheobe but he can be all mean and bold to minho...that is love~

i will do my best! thank you for reading and commenting!

Date: 2012-02-29 11:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reinyuu.livejournal.com
AM I?? lol
aaah he just trying to hide his shyness in front of minho...
i c u lee jinki xD

yeaah yeaah im waiting you..you know..
and take your time ::-D

Date: 2012-03-01 03:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keziayansen.livejournal.com
OMO, this is the first time I read this story, and I loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooove it ^__________^
OMO, Yeah I really support Minho...
Go go go go Minho....

Well, I think there's must something from Onew's past that make him phobia with people, kekekeeke.....

Update sooon......

Fighting XD

p.s. OMO I really love this story after read it in the first time..... I'll wait <3

Date: 2012-03-04 11:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] legna-angels.livejournal.com
I'm totally hooked! MORE MORE MORE! Please?

Date: 2012-03-05 02:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] trinkdufreak.livejournal.com
aaah i see you found this one too, i am working on the third part at the moment, i am really getting somewhere with it lol.

and to the comment on the previous part, Im really glad ppl are liking this different version of Onew i have made up. ^^ he is feisty~ heehee

thank you for reading and commenting! third part should be up soon!

Date: 2012-04-23 09:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hibikiecho.livejournal.com
hellz yeah Onew! finally someone who sticks up for what they believe in but dang that was harsh even i felt that one.

"He fucking mocked him, with his fucking smile. That brilliant smile that warmed his heart and broke it all at once. He was fucking smiling at him, while throwing those hateful words in his face. He was tearing him apart, with that fucking smile."


Don't mess with the On-man

Glad Minho isn't giving up.~i get knocked down but i get up again, you're never gonna keep me down~

Date: 2012-04-24 06:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] trinkdufreak.livejournal.com
LMAO
the gif was a nice touch!
Onew is a harsh person, he's very honest no? but yeah. i felt kind of sad writing this one...
thank you for another lovely comment! :D
off to reply to the others!

Date: 2012-04-26 01:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] seungjiyeon.livejournal.com
HE'S SOOOOO CUUUTE! I can't believe it! He'll ask until Onew dares to accept! I thought that Onew would (kinda) understand Minho's feelings... But the second time had been worse than the first... He almost destroy Minho's feelings. That's so cruel!!! I understand the fact that he doesn't like people... He's not the social type... But HELL! I felt bad for Minho! Like all of Onew's words were for me...

Thanks for sharing! It was amazing!

Date: 2012-04-26 01:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] trinkdufreak.livejournal.com
I'm just going to be honest, i was having a blech day and it was boringa and annoying. your comments were a pleasant surprise. seriously.
thank you for reading!!!
kekekeke minho is cute right? he gets cuter in my opinion muahaha :D
you know i thought he would understand too, but then he lashed out and i was like "onew calm down!" but he kept yelling, so i let him. he scared me too.
thank you for your sweet comments and reading my story!! <333

Date: 2012-10-12 11:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] acornmama.livejournal.com
I did wonder if part of it was Onew being afraid but yeah Minho made it worse. But how much do I love that Minho just would not give up! Sweeeet!
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