So I re-read this scene over and over again. And at first I thought 'I don't see where they're coming from. I didn't write this scene as rape." but just because I didn't write it as rape doesn't make it not so right?
But as I continued reading over it and asking some friends for feedback, I can see where I've fallen short. Jinki said no, Minho kept going even as Jinki continued to protest. I literally smacked myself in the head, no means no and in this situation Minho should have stopped. I failed to write about how Jinki was overly sensitive yet enjoying himself. (I mean in my mind it was all laid out and Minho could feel Jinki's emotions so everything was good but I suck yeah) I've made a mistake. I apologize. my intentions were never to write a textbook rape scene or to disturb you. I never thought a warning was needed. I never ever wanted to glorify this type of act, I do not condone it in any way. But obviously I am at fault because you were offended. And for that I apologize.
You may take this however you like, but I'm sincerely apologizing. I hope in the future we can get along. If you would like to PM to discuss this further or just to tell me off (I get it I messed up) please feel free to do so.
In the end I'd like to thank you for your input. Thank you.
The Inconspicuous Asshole: Beware of Douchebagery and Fuckery
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Date: 2013-09-25 06:44 pm (UTC)But as I continued reading over it and asking some friends for feedback, I can see where I've fallen short. Jinki said no, Minho kept going even as Jinki continued to protest. I literally smacked myself in the head, no means no and in this situation Minho should have stopped. I failed to write about how Jinki was overly sensitive yet enjoying himself. (I mean in my mind it was all laid out and Minho could feel Jinki's emotions so everything was good but I suck yeah) I've made a mistake. I apologize. my intentions were never to write a textbook rape scene or to disturb you. I never thought a warning was needed. I never ever wanted to glorify this type of act, I do not condone it in any way. But obviously I am at fault because you were offended. And for that I apologize.
You may take this however you like, but I'm sincerely apologizing. I hope in the future we can get along.
If you would like to PM to discuss this further or just to tell me off (I get it I messed up) please feel free to do so.
In the end I'd like to thank you for your input. Thank you.