Honestly...

I need someone to proof read my shitty writing because I am not sure where my plots are going!!
Anyone want to volunteer? 
I would probably send them to you by PM and stuff and then I would need detailed feedback:
-does the next chapter make sense? 
-good details? bad details?
-any awkward parts?
and things like that...desperate here...anyone interested??? o.o

*lies down and prepares to die*